Amazing Exploding Sentence
Dear Geist,
How can I break up a logjam in my novel? It’s a passage about halfway through, and it’s right at the heart of the protagonist’s trouble, and I care about it. But for some reason I cannot get it to work. I’ve rewritten it four times now and every draft is more tortured than the last one. Any suggestions?
—Stuck in the Middle, Sherwood Park AB
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